Richard's stories, theatre, and English teaching

In this blog I will comment on things related to my work as an educator to students who are new to English, as a drama teacher, and as a storyteller. The views and information are my own and do not represent the English Language Fellow Program or the U.S. Department of State. To find shorter, more frequent postings you can follow me on twitter (@richardsilberg), or instagram (richardrjs)

Monday, November 28, 2011

This $$^@# does not write itself

Last night I finished what I am calling a rehearsal draft of the play.  Most of it is complete, but a few scenes remain to be worked out in rehearsal.  I like to leave some things open so the kids continue to feel as if the play is theirs.  In truth it is part them part me.  Throughout the writing process, which entailed me locking myself in my house for 5 days during the Thanksgiving break, doing nothing but writing, reading and thinking about the project, I was  deeply influenced by the work the ensemble had done over the 2 months of our devising work  (recalling movement sequences they had created)  but would also forget it and let the play develop naturally as I wrote it.  Some scenes were based on their devising, but some of it grew entirely from the writing process.
Today I will get to school early, make about 15 copies of the 40 page script, and we will read it aloud.  It should take 2 days of reading.  After that I will spend a few days revising based on what I hear and the students input and we will begin casting and rehearsals next week.
Two things about the title of this blog entry. One:  I have a colleague, a drama teacher at another school, who told me that writing plays was easy:  once you have  character's and their wants decided on you place an obstacle in their path, and the play just develops.  Two: I saw a t-shirt in a local shop:  a picture of Shakespeare, with the words:  This shit writes itself.   Well, after many weeks of sweating through the ideas of the play and a solid 5 days of nothing but writing I have to say:  it ain't true.  This was hard.  Maybe my friend and Shakespeare know something I don't, but from my experience trying to take ideas created and developed by young people, and meld it into a coherent, enjoyable, funny and meaningful theatrical piece known as a play, took a hell of a lot of time and focus.  It was far from easy, and it sure didn't write itself.  I'm just sayin'.
Let's hope the kids like it today.

Tuesday, November 15, 2011

Sleep No More and Islamic Art: Occupy the Hagia Sophia

I have been working on the script for a week now.  Mostly writing ideas.  Some might call it procrastinating.  Maybe, maybe not.  A student emailed me some basic thoughts that were intriguing--he wanted some new character introduced one that represented an outsider religion into what was essentially a Christian/Islamic conflict.  It got me thinking how odd it was to be developing a play about religion, religious conflict, and religious art.  He proposed a Jewish artist.  I thought, great, if it isn't complicated enough I have to now placate all religious views....

So this is in my thoughts when I went to NYC this past week.  3 events there, mixed in with this students thoughts, influenced the way the play is taking shape.  One:  I went to visit the Occupy Wall Street site, and then on my way back to the subway, I walked by the site of the world trade center.  Then took the subway uptown to the recently reopened Islamic art exhibit at the Metropolitan Museum, and then, in the evening saw the most spectacular theatre I have seen in years:  Punchdrunk's adaptation/meditation on Macbeth:  "Sleep No More".  

These 3 seemingly unrelated events really did a number on my subconscious.  What I discovered at the Islamic art exhibit was how Ottoman art in particular, and Islamic art in general, were greatly influenced by art movements and artists that lived throughout their empire.  For the Ottomans, and this has direct bearing on the work that is in the Hagia Sophia, it is quite possible that Sephardic Jewish influences were present.  The Ottomans, for all their other faults, were very tolerant and in fact encouraging, of different religions and cultural influences.  Indeed the Jews and the Muslims had a lot in common in this region of the world, both being kicked out of Spain during the Inquisition, just before the fall of Constantinople.  In fact the Ottoman's invited the jews to repopulate the cities of Salonika and Istanbul after the fall of the Byzantine empire decimated these cities populations.  So, for our play, it is quite possible to include characters from all over the Ottoman empire who were brought to the court because of their artistic talent.  

Then there was "Sleep No More".  In simplest terms it was as if I was invited to participate in someone else's nightmare, both as a witness and a participant.  And what a nightmare it was: the Macbeths.  It was presented non linearly and mostly in dance/movement.  I could, as a masked observer/participant do anything in a five story "haunted house" environment--explore a room, follow non masked actors, whatever.  It reminded me of this basic idea while writing this script:  if you can say it with movement and sound and lighting there is no need for words.

This concept is reliving me of the burden of taking the deep work by our students, which was created through movement, and trying to put it into words.  I think that it this point I am writing a sketch: something that outlines movements and physical pictures and will let words come if necessary through the 6 week rehearsal process.  This is true for many episodes in the play.  There are some of course where words are coming as I work on it, but for most it is getting the picture in my head and writing it down.  What follows is an example, a draft of the opening, which places a high value on movement and sound but does include some necessary dialogue to move our story along.

Oh, before I include that I have to talk of the Occupy movement (Helicopters hover over Berkeley as I sit in a cafe near the UC campus, monitoring the student strike here).  It reminded me of the impetus behind this play in the first place.  The Hagia Sophia's history is relevant to today's world, as all history is.  It reminds us that human's have had the conflicts before that dominate the headlines today.  Being near the world trade center site reminded me of the news from a few months ago of the outrage by some at the proposal of building a mosque/islamic community center near this "sacred site".  So the outrage at the changing of the Hagia Sophia from a Christian church first built by a pagan emperor, then transformed into a different brand of Christian worship by invading armies from the West, then it's conversion into an Islamic mosque, and finally a secular museum plays itself out in today's world as well.

Ok so here's the opening as of now.


Opening/Prologue

1453 
There is music, of course.
One young artist runs out onto the stage from backstage—ending up downstage center.  It is a girl or a boy, carrying a blank canvas.  There is a sense that s/he has been running a long time, and is making certain no one is following.   Another comes, from a different place, perhaps from the audience area.  They embrace, but are clearly wary, looking about. One begins to speak, but the other stops them, so they won’t be heard.They set up the canvas and begin to work on it together.  A series of words appear on the backdrop: ‘ The Year: 1453.   The place: The Hagia Sophia, the great church of the Holy Wisdom, in Constantinople.  It is the last moments of the Byzantine Empire.’
They are working on the painting, and we hear the sounds of war in the background—canons, explosions, yelling.  The two artists are clearly fearful and painting with great urgency.  We can tell, through their clothing that the two artists are different.  One is an Ottoman Turk, one a Byzantine.  In the background we hear the progression of the battle that rages outside.  The artists move their work, closer and closer to the audience, in a zig/zag pattern across and down the stage, finally ending crouching below the stage, on the stage left side of the theatre, hiding, but still working.   It has to be clear, through movement if not in words,  that it is essential that they get the painting done, now!.  Armies clash behind them, in front of them, some in giant shadow behind, some in shadow on scrim (using as many walls as possible to create this battle, both in shadow and on stage)  Shouts:  The Turks have broken through the walls and other shouts we will develop.  Actors in black costume will be holding hand held lights and will cast  shadows of the battle.  There will be a rhythmic exchange of movement/tableux between the painters and the soldiers.  Only when the soldiers are in tableux should the artists speak.  At last  the Sultan Mehmet II Enters downstage center, a soldier is seen taking something of value.  Mehmet  II holds him by the neck:

Mehmet  II

Why are you destroying this floor, soldier?

Soldier

For the faith, my commander.

Mehmet  II

Did you not hear?  Leave the building alone.  The Hagia Sophia is mine.  Content yourselves with treasures from elsewhere.
This comes to a tableux (dead soldiers, Mehmet)
Our artists come to life here and are focus

Ottoman Artist

We have to hide this.  If the Sultan or any of his soldiers find it, he will surely destroy it, and kill us.

Byzantine Artists

But it’s not finished.

Ottoman Artist

We don’t have time to finish it.  It’s better like this, half done, then destroyed.  Destroyed it does no good.

Byzantine Artist

A few more strokes, with your pen, then, your Calligraphy is what makes it whole.

Ottoman Artist

And your portraits, I wish I could paint like you—you bring to life the very prophets themselves.

Byzantine Artist

I could teach you, and you could teach me.

Ottoman Artist

But it is forbidden

Byzantine Artist

So it is. For now.  I wish we could show this.  Even incomplete it is something the world has never seen.

Ottoman Artist

It is beautiful, yes, but they are not ready yet.  Maybe, someday.  But not now.
Let’s hide it now, or we will die and it will be destroyed and nothing will change. 

Byzantine Artist

Even unfinished, it is a thing of beauty—a blend of our worlds.
There comes a point where the tableux’s begin to move in slow motion, while our artists continue to talk, at last they notice the movement and urgency again takes over.
They will find us…where can we hide it.

Ottoman Artist

The building itself will hold it.  Behind one of your mosaics.  Maybe the one of the prophet, Jesus, or the one of Mary.

Byzantine Artist

No.  Those are the first places  they’ll look. Let’s think. 

Ottoman Artist

No time.

Byzantine Artist

No, I have it…upstairs, on a railing, there’s some strange writing that no one knows anything about…It just looks like scratches, nothing of value or of danger to your faith.  They’ll leave that alone…Let’s roll it up and put it under there.  Quickly….

They roll up the unfinished painting, and make their way and we show them hiding it, as the shadows of the soldiers move around

End scene


Thursday, November 3, 2011

November 1st: Last meeting before writing

Today was the last day of the ensemble before we take a break for almost 3 weeks (there will be one meeting for us to check in on Monday, November 21.)  It was an excellent final meeting and I used a process that I wish I had done at least a week before.  Rather than have the students continue their small group pieces, which were getting us no new ideas, and were getting us, in my opinion, further from things that could actually be used in a play, we worked together.  I first re-told the frame story, which I've recounted in past blogs but basically involves several tour groups of children in the modern Hagia Sophia, and an earthquake causes about 5 kids from all the groups getting stranded in the museum.  Over the course of their stay they encounter 2 main characters that live in the Hagia Sophia as shadows:  two artists, one responsible for the Christian art work, one responsible for the Islamic artwork.  Through the night, different shadows appear recreating different moments in the history of this great building, and recreating other things that reflect the themes inherent in the building.  Then, a secret is revealed:  a piece of artwork is hidden in the Hagia Sophia that has never been found.  It is something that these two shadow artists created together:  a piece that reflects an integration of Christian and Islamic art forms--it hasn't been revealed because these artists felt the world wasn't ready for it.  And the question is:  is the world ready for it now?
This is the basic frame story.  I then asked the ensemble to think of anything we have done over the past 2 months that they felt absolutely had to go into the play.  And to list other things they wanted in the piece as I began my writing.  Our list was large, but specific.

• Pulling people out of a hat in shadow (something our shadow artist, christine marie, showed us).
• A skit called:  "In the name of the conquistador" that a group presented based on themes.
• Cheese jokes (background:  every play I have written has a cheese joke in it--they wanted to make certain this one does as well)
• Transparent cars (again from our shadow introduction)
• A scene with people on shoulders (again from our work on themes)
• A prologue showing the Christian and Islamic artist painting together in secrecy, with great urgency, as we hear the sounds of the armies fighting in 1453.  The painting has to get done now, and hidden, before it is destroyed.
• Make it a musical
• Include a character of a drunk old man
•  Have the Hagia  Sophia as a character/narrator.
•  A commercial break in the middle of the play, at height of action.
•  How to choose the 5 that get left behind ideas:  tour guides ask questions that check them; have them be artists; they ate cheese last night...
• An arugement as to which cheese is better:  Italian or Turkish.
• Graffiti:  connect modern graffiti with viking graffiti that is in the Hagia Sophia
•  The shadow artists cannot rest until their work is revealed and accepted.
• Create background stories for the 5 chosen tourists that leads to conflicts.
• In shadow work include characters from a previous play which dealt with the dream world
• An earlier piece (from our first session where students imbuded an object with sacredness) that involved the clock representing time itself.
• The conflict the fossati bros and the sultan at the time Abdul Medjid must have had by uncovering and then covering some mosaics.
• Use tableuxs

Each item involved spirited discussion and thought.  Then, and this is the part I should have done earlier, and now in retrospect, should be an every other week activity through the devising process: after making our list students volunteered to take responsibility for one or more of the items, and writing anything from simple summaries, thoughts, all the way to full blown scenes, that they would email to me, so I could use them in my writing.  A few hours after the session ended I received an email from a student who wrote a biography of one of the 5 young tourists trapped in the museum.

The next two weeks is about writing for me.  I think this last session will be helpful, and I am anxious to see if any follow through and write up their ideas.  So, a note to those following along, and to myself for next years devising project:  Every few weeks have a session where we note what we have done that we feel must find its way into our piece, and get the students to take more responsibility for at least attempting to write it as a scene right then!